Feedback

Here is the feedback on my ident from other people. From it I have gained a clear understanding on how to improve it to a greater standard for example. The footage is not always in focus and the camera is being moved about which makes the shots look out of place from one another, this was because the camera I used was on a low battery which required me to change the batteries throughout filming it, to avoid this I will make sure the battery is charged before taking the camera next time and may even use my own camera so that the detail is a lot better.