Here we have highlighted the key points from the feedback we received from Sam during the editing process of our work.

From reviewing this feedback during the editing process we agreed with most parts, we already knew these issues existed just for a first draft we had little time to work on it so a rough copy was sent off. When we resumed work we changed a fair amount to give it an extra boost. We worked on the audio as we was aware the John had said a his line ''Romans, make way'' too loud, we made an attempt to correct this by lowering the audio however this could only fix some of it as the damage had already been done which meant it would never sound perfect and you would still hear a pierce in the audio recording.
With the overlay at the end of Tamora we simply fixed by re-framing the overlay, it was fairly simple and once done it looked excellent, it gave across a stronger effect than before and looked professional.
The other issues were to do with cutting and replacing or re-arranging certain shots, this was an issue we was fully aware of and had continued to work on whilst Sam looked over the copy we had sent it, this was mainly down to the limited time we had on the project at the start and by the end it was mostly fixed, there was still some shots that could of been improved however it the final version worked well especially for the time we had and how we had never worked with this drama academy before.
Here is a questionnaire we had filled out by one of the clients .
The feedback from this was mostly positive as he client was really pleased with what we had done as shown below. The only criticism we received was about the start, this is because and agree with this, the framing is off and it isn't clear who the main characters are, I fully agree with the comments made on this and if given more time I would of really liked to of re-shot those shots, from seeing the rest of extract it is obvious this is are weakest point. On the day of filming we was pushed for time as we had a lot to sort out so it turned into just getting the shots done and not being able to look at them in detail which was a huge shame.
The other feedback we received however was of high praise which was pleasing to see as my group worked hard on this project. I agree especially with what she said about the location, we chose it as we knew it would give off this effect so to see the client liking it is pleasing to hear.

With the overlay at the end of Tamora we simply fixed by re-framing the overlay, it was fairly simple and once done it looked excellent, it gave across a stronger effect than before and looked professional.
The other issues were to do with cutting and replacing or re-arranging certain shots, this was an issue we was fully aware of and had continued to work on whilst Sam looked over the copy we had sent it, this was mainly down to the limited time we had on the project at the start and by the end it was mostly fixed, there was still some shots that could of been improved however it the final version worked well especially for the time we had and how we had never worked with this drama academy before.
Here is a questionnaire we had filled out by one of the clients .
The feedback from this was mostly positive as he client was really pleased with what we had done as shown below. The only criticism we received was about the start, this is because and agree with this, the framing is off and it isn't clear who the main characters are, I fully agree with the comments made on this and if given more time I would of really liked to of re-shot those shots, from seeing the rest of extract it is obvious this is are weakest point. On the day of filming we was pushed for time as we had a lot to sort out so it turned into just getting the shots done and not being able to look at them in detail which was a huge shame.
The other feedback we received however was of high praise which was pleasing to see as my group worked hard on this project. I agree especially with what she said about the location, we chose it as we knew it would give off this effect so to see the client liking it is pleasing to hear.

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